|
That's so **** epic.
I'd give him a 100 just for that ending. xD Maybe even extra points.
|
|
He was getting good comments from the teacher, then all of a sudden he ruins it. LOLOLOLOLOLOL
|
|
LOL. And way to get all of your info from Wikipedia.
Hero.
|
|
OBVIOUSLY not corrected by a teacher, geniuses. A person with that poor of grammar, spelling, and not to mention, handwriting, would never be hired by a school. It's a sad excuse for a funny, real, paper.
|
|
i love this!! i would give it an AAA+++ :D :D
|
|
I think it's bullshit that the teacher failed him just for the ending.
|
|
I have to say, either the taecher aspect of it was badly faked, or someone had a horrible teacher. No wonder his writing is so bad...
|
|
omg, this is is just like copypasta
|
|
Wow... It's pretty funny to watch all the smiles next to the comments that say "Great beginning!" and such... turn into "INCOMPLETE and SEE ME AFTER CLASS ( although they mess up on some of the spellings...) Although he DID have a nice beginning, so I don't think that it deserves an "F".
|
|
well...he had a good intro
|
|
hmm, a smiley.. a smiley.. n a 'good!' but in d end, d typical PLEASE SEE ME AFTER CLASS comment. go figure..~
|
|
that was a good paper....i'd at least give him a c.
plus, the stupid teacher is BLINDDD
|
|
This teacher is grammatically challenged. The kid's essay is full of errors. Damn, lose the smiley faces too, teach ... have some dignity.
|
|
the teacher should fail for her incomrlete spelling and her not accestable behavior...teacher fail.
|
|
WHATA **** BITCH if i did all tht and she said every thing was gd but ending sucked sso i get an f I WOULD GO **** MENTAL
|