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INCOMRLETE!
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i would give extra marks for that ending
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SHE WOULD FAIL HIM FOR THAT ENDING?!?!
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Good intro? There's a fucking comma splice in the first fucking sentence! Send the teacher back to grammar school.
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This teacher should fail for their inability to proofread correctly. There are SO many more errors than what they marked. (And the teacher has awful penmanship as well!) Gee, can you tell I'm a teacher?
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it's not accestable. Nice writting.
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ROFL. THE FRESH PRINCE OF BEL AIR JUST CAME ON MY TV AS I WAS READING THIS XD
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Nice editing teacher "Twords" is not a word, and Shcool? Perhaps the Teacher should go back to "Shcool" LOL
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this is totally fake.
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I like this kid. They also like good music.
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This teacher has such great editing skills considering she (he? o_0) completely failed to notice all the spelling mistakes and her horrible spelling XD Maybe she/he should go back to "shcool"
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fake, children's handwriting. even adults with poor handwriting don't scrawl like that.
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OMG Bel-Air'd! Epic!
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Wow, most of this is straight off of Wikipedia. Well, except that last part.
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David, RLEASE see me after class.
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imcompRlete?
anyone else catch that?
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well...he had a good intro
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This is so obviously plagiarized. MCB
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Fifth line down, "school" is spelled incorrectly. Come on, teacher.
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At the top the teacher put "Incomrete" instead of "Incomplete".
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