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this is seriously a well written essay.VERY FUNNY HAHA
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If the teacher knew what it was and saw this paper i bet he would have seizures from laughing... alas, its obvious he did not LOLOLOL
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"I must say, this is not a horribly written piece. i honestly do not know why this obtained a 0. Yes, this may be gross; however, this is college and college must deal with very broad subjects to be well diversed in education and learning. The person was very brief and needed to explain more in the first paragraph, other than this, i do not see a failing grade in this paper. lol this is fucking amazing."
<<<<<< THEN I WILL VOTE YOU FOR MY NEXT PRESIDENT
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Firstly, there's a second page... I want to see it.
Secondly, while not deserving a 0% I would probably fail it too... Rather than commenting on it on a timeline of the video, he should have organised it into thematics and expounded on each point using evidence from the whole video.
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I think this guy was series when he wrote it. Not sure though
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u bet ur ass this isnt a badly writtern piece. references to Bakhtin, Femisnism and other postmodern studies, anyone who's studied art theory will know this person knew what he/she was writing...
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Not only was the genre puke-worthy the essay itself sucked! It doesn't matter if a college student wrote it. I've seen high school papers written with more substance!
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I heard Roger Ebert gave this a 2 thumbs 1 up
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A. This guy is dillusional the whole thing was innappropriate not just the last two paragraphs haha.
B. The fact that the professor wants him to "explain more" is a little disturbing.
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lol @ "masterful" in the first sentence
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Citation needed.
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The tone of this paper was more academic than many. Choosing words like "phallus" and "fecal" are more than appropriate for academic discourse on a video such as that one. It is almost parodic of this genre of scholarship.
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That teacher is dumb "Phallus?" "WHAT?" SHe obviously has never read literature or analyzed it Freudianly!
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If the teacher didn't want a review of porn, he/she should specifically have told the students "NO PORN".
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I have to say this kid is an amazing writer. He wrote a full review and deserves half credit for writing it.
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LMAO!
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he left something out
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I love how you can see the point where the teacher goes "WHAAT?!?!?!"
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very eloquent and properly summarized imo...
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I just see a guy masturbating. No wait, that's just my reflection in the monitor...
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